Apply @HonkingGoose suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: HonkingGoose <34918129+HonkingGoose@users.noreply.github.com>

Author: myarb

content/education/explore-the-benefits-of-teaching-and-learning-with-github-education/why-wasnt-my-application-for-a-student-developer-pack-approved.md

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ versions:
 
 ### Unclear academic affiliation documents
 
-If the dates or schedule mentioned in your uploaded image doesn't matches our eligibility criteria, we require further proof of your academic status.
+If the dates or schedule mentioned in your uploaded image do not match our eligibility criteria, we require further proof of your academic status.
 
 If the image you uploaded doesn't clearly identify your current academic status or if the uploaded image is blurry, we require further proof of your academic status. {% data reusables.education.upload-proof-reapply %}
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ For more information, see:
 
 You're ineligible for a {% data variables.product.prodname_student_pack %} if:
 - You're enrolled in an informal learning program that is not part of the [{% data variables.product.prodname_dotcom %} Campus Program](https://education.github.com/schools) and not enrolled in a degree or diploma granting course of study.
-You're studying in a degree which is about to get terminated in current academic session (such as for 2021. If you're about to pass your degree by the mid of 2021.
+You're pursuing a degree which will be terminated in the current academic session.
 - You're under 13 years old.
 
 Your instructor may still apply for a {% data variables.product.prodname_education %} discount for classroom use. If you're a student at a coding school or bootcamp, you will become eligible for a {% data variables.product.prodname_student_pack %} if your school joins the [{% data variables.product.prodname_dotcom %} Campus Program](https://education.github.com/schools).