Incorporate reviewer feedback

Author: ethanpalm

content/desktop/contributing-and-collaborating-using-github-desktop/cloning-and-forking-repositories-from-github-desktop.md

@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@ versions:
 ---
 
 ### About local repositories
-Repositories on {% data variables.product.prodname_dotcom %} are remote repositories that you can clone or fork with {% data variables.product.prodname_desktop %} to create a local repository.
+Repositories on {% data variables.product.prodname_dotcom %} are remote repositories. You can clone or fork a repository with {% data variables.product.prodname_desktop %} to create a local repository on your computer.
 
-You can create a local copy of any repository on {% data variables.product.product_name %} that you have access to by cloning the repository. If you own a repository or are a have write permissions, you can sync between the local and remote locations. For more information, see "[Syncing your branch](/desktop/contributing-and-collaborating-using-github-desktop/syncing-your-branch)."
+You can create a local copy of any repository on {% data variables.product.product_name %} that you have access to by cloning the repository. If you own a repository or have write permissions, you can sync between the local and remote locations. For more information, see "[Syncing your branch](/desktop/contributing-and-collaborating-using-github-desktop/syncing-your-branch)."
 
-When you clone a repository, any changes you push to {% data variables.product.product_name %} will affect the original repository. To make changes without affecting the original project, you can create a separate copy by forking the repository. You can open a pull request to propose that maintainers incorporate the changes in your fork to the original upstream repository. For more information, see "[About forks](/github/collaborating-with-issues-and-pull-requests/about-forks)."
+When you clone a repository, any changes you push to {% data variables.product.product_name %} will affect the original repository. To make changes without affecting the original project, you can create a separate copy by forking the repository. You can create a pull request to propose that maintainers incorporate the changes in your fork into the original upstream repository. For more information, see "[About forks](/github/collaborating-with-issues-and-pull-requests/about-forks)."
 
 When you try to use {% data variables.product.prodname_desktop %} to clone a repository that you do not have write access to, {% data variables.product.prodname_desktop %} will prompt you to create a fork automatically. You can choose to use your fork to contribute to the original upstream repository or to work independently on your own project. Any existing forks default to contributing changes to their upstream repositories. You can modify this choice at any time. For more information, see "[Managing fork behavior](#managing-fork-behavior)".
 
@@ -38,6 +38,8 @@ If you clone a repository that you do not have write access to, {% data variable
 {% data reusables.desktop.fork-type-prompt %}
 
 ### Managing fork behavior
+You can change how a fork behaves with the upstream repository in {% data variables.product.prodname_desktop %}.
+
 {% data reusables.desktop.open-repository-settings %}
 {% data reusables.desktop.select-fork-behavior %}
 

data/reusables/desktop/open-repository-settings.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-1. If you want to change how a fork behaves with the upstream repository, open the **Repository** menu, then click **Repository settings...**.
+1. Open the **Repository** menu, then click **Repository settings...**.
 
   {% mac %}
 

data/reusables/desktop/select-fork-behavior.md

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
-1. Click **Fork behavior**. 
-2. If you want the fork to make pull requests to the original upstream repository, select **To contribute to the parent repository**.
+1. Click **Fork behavior**, then select how you want to use the fork.
 
   {% mac %}
 
@@ -13,21 +12,7 @@
 
   {% endwindows %}
 
-3. If you want to keep changes to the fork separate from the upstream repository, select **For my own purposes**.
-
-  {% mac %}
-
-  ![The own purposes option in the Fork Behavior menu](/assets/images/help/desktop/mac-fork-behavior-menu-own.png)
-
-  {% endmac %}
-
-  {% windows %}
-
-  ![The own purposes option in the Fork Behavior menu](/assets/images/help/desktop/windows-fork-behavior-menu-own.png)
-
-  {% endwindows %}
-
-4. Click **Save**.
+2. Click **Save**.
 
   {% mac %}