diff --git a/docs/PLAN.md b/docs/PLAN.md
index f444eda..0cb0540 100644
--- a/docs/PLAN.md
+++ b/docs/PLAN.md
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ file is the source of truth for what's next.
 Alongside development, focus promotion on regular users and useful feedback.
 The illustrated "Try a five-minute writing session" guide and GitHub
 feedback form landed in PR #24. The guide is linked from the demo caption
-and README and uses the reader's regular vault. Next, sharpen the homepage
-around the writing experience and actively recruit people to try a session.
+and README and uses the reader's regular vault. Homepage positioning landed
+in PR #25. Actively recruit people to try a session.
 Prepare suitable community placements together; do not wait two weeks for
 a directory listing before doing more outreach. Learn where new writers
 get stuck and whether they return on another day.
diff --git a/site/templates/index.html b/site/templates/index.html
index f9b0f75..1e2ead6 100644
--- a/site/templates/index.html
+++ b/site/templates/index.html
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 {% block content %}
 <section class="hero">
   <h1>A writing app for the terminal.</h1>
-  <p class="lede">A quiet place to write Markdown. Saved automatically, encrypted on your computer.</p>
+  <p class="lede">A quiet place to write Markdown. Local and encrypted.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section class="install">